0. Intro đźš§
My favorite poem is the one that starts “Thirty days hath September” because it actually tells you something.
— Groucho Marx
Not heeding the stark observation by Groucho Marx—the one where he opines that poems are essentially useless by way of the words, “My favorite poem is the one that starts Thirty days hath September because it actually tells you something”—we’re going to dive feet-first into the ocean of rhyme. No, prose it not over-rated; it’s not that. It’s just that verse is under-rated.
And we are going to set the record straight by demonstrating that verse is an equal partner of prose. With that—and inviting you to peek at the image coming into view now, that of a ragtag, loosely scattered gold bricks—let’s dive feet-first into the ocean of rhyme, an offering of which follows the image.
1. In Full Candor, Then, The Poem Itself 🎨
Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.
— Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Ember by Ember
Ember by ember, bit by bit,
Things warmed up, the fire was lit
Seared in the pit,
The words were writ Â
Bit by bit
Wit by wit Â
Slowly, mitt by mitt,
The essays were knit Â
Bit by bit,
Fit by fit Â
Essays saved and archived, hit by hit,
Pushed to Git, commit by commitÂ
Missives undelivered or intercepted, chit by chit
So who subjugated who, Brit by Brit? Â
Brick upon brick, grit by grit,
The gleaming edifice was builtÂ
The rocket was readied for takeoff, bit by bit
The literature was assembled, DIY-kit by DIY-kitÂ
Aha, this must be the house that Peterbilt,
Wait! No! This is the house that Akram builtÂ
Don Quixote sure had at the windmill, tilt by tilt,
So did Milton in his own way, I suppose “Milt” by “Milt”Â
So let the bits fly, Akram, you twit
Let ’em fly (like a snitch), wit by wit Â
Bit by bit,
Lit by lit Â
All the world’s but a stage, with men and women engaged in some bizarre skit,
Where tweets alight from the sky like bird-poop, aerial s**t by aerial s**t Â
What is this thing with feathers that seems to dart about and flit?,
Builds our dreams, yet goes for the throat, slit by slitÂ
All the same, hit by hit,
The essays became fit Â
Every single essay I ever wrote, IÂ winged it,
Every song that arose in my heart, IÂ singed itÂ
Ember unto ember, hilt unto hilt,
The embers glowed, the fire had been lit Â
Sit back and watch the embers show their glow; sit now sit,
Bask in the glowing edifice that’s been rewrit; it’s been lit 🏰
— Akram Ahmad (writer, blogger, software craftsman)
I like these lines:
Every single essay I ever wrote, I winged it,
Every song that arose in my heart, I singed it
You are a true poet, Akram!
So all these years, I’ve been a poet, and I didn’t even know it! 🙂
What I really meant to say, is that in these days of dark news, lines like these make me smile.
Your marvelous thought—an uplifting one in these times—has made my day, and I thank you dearly!